Saturday, February 5, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

"Whore," he breathed into her ear.

Her eyes opened. "Yeah, maybe," she spat around the gag, then used her teeth to bite it flat. "But this whore is going to rip your guts out."

The sound of gravel being crushed under a boot was his laugh, and it went on too long. 

It stopped when she yanked her blade from the hole it had torn.

9 comments:

  1. Wow! Can't say he didn't deserve that tho, I'd stab too. lol! :)

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  2. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday, Lauri. What a fantastic six to start with!

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  3. I love that line, "gravel being crushed under boot was his laugh"

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  4. Thanks to all of you for the encouragement! I read these and wanted to give it a shot.

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  5. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday, Lauri!
    Great, action-packe debut!

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  6. Very good 6 :-) Great to have you on board ;-)

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  7. WOW!!! This is awesome lil Laur!!

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